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Excellent. I am fully engrossed in this.

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Thanks Jim, for reading and for the kind words! Appreciate you.

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Jun 12, 2023Liked by Garrett Francis

Hey Garrett - I'm loving the backstory of Reyn's father and mother, the flashes of Vitri and his wife, I feel like the characters keep getting more and more complex with each episode! I'm still not sure what's going on with Vitri at the end of the chapter, why he stumbled - at first I thought he'd been shot by someone off stage, or having a heart attack...? More will be revealed... :)

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Troy! Hope you're having a good week, my friend. Thank you for reading and for the comment! My apologies for having fallen behind lately with my own reading -- I've been spending a lot of what would be my reading time bolstering up my day job skills and wisdom. I'm so happy to hear that the characters are working for you! I touch a little upon the events at the end of Part 9 in the commentary, but more to come with the next installment!

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