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Jul 2, 2023Liked by Garrett Francis

I saved this for a Sunday morning read. So much going on in this chapter. The anger in Reyn is palpable. The flashback to her odd home life, her very flawed parents, a flicker of new friendship that is quickly extinguished, the betrayal of trust by Vitri. Wow. Nice work Garrett.

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Thanks so much for reading, Jim, and for the very kind words!

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Jun 24, 2023Liked by Garrett Francis

Oh god... Why didn't it register what was happening in the last episode??? This is terrible! So mad at Vitri... and now I'm seeing there's two episodes left? Holy cow, how to pull this one out in two more episodes?! :) The End is in sight, good, bad or ugly... ::)) Great episode Garrett!

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Thanks Troy!! The end is in sight, indeed :) I'm actually considering sending out the last two installments on the same day (July 8th)... if I do, I think it'll be clear as to why. Really appreciate you reading and commenting!

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