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I wasn't sure where to start in your Substack collection, but this one called to me. I'm glad it did. It was beautiful and the details felt so deeply personal for the main character. Well done!

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Aww, thank you for reading! And for the kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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Feb 2, 2023·edited Feb 2, 2023Liked by Garrett Francis

Might be my favourite short story on substack so far. Better than most I’ve read in general too. Well done

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Wow, thank you! I really appreciate the kind words. Many thanks for reading & commenting.

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What a striking piece that reads as an authentic experience. I find your choice of narrator interesting as well. All the three protagonists are so endearing too.

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Love this, Garrett - I cheated and read it from before ;)

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